Reviews for Avian Soul
Shinji Boi69 chapter 1 . 6/6/2004
This poem is very good. I love the repitition used. It's almost professional. Great job. Keep up the awsome work.
Jake.
invalid id chapter 1 . 6/5/2004
I honestly can't think of anything to say, you are just simply outstanding as a writer and should get your own book.
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 6/3/2004
*claps* wonderful as always
danny chapter 1 . 6/3/2004
i love the repeated words. i think that you have a theme of soul throughout all of your poems. it's terrific!
catseyeview chapter 1 . 6/3/2004
I love what you did with this. We often look to the flame but this is a reminder of how delicate that flame is, how easy it can be extinguished. Nice work.
WakeRobin chapter 1 . 6/3/2004
Wow that's quite a poem. I really like it though it is sad. Love your work!