Reviews for a wink, a drink and a look |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Love how you wrote it out. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very interesting. I love the rhyming couplets in each line. Entertaining! Short and sweet i say ) hehe, i hope you get a chance to review some of my recent work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just looked back at the shows you've been to, and it made this poem make sense...Very Emo *winces* Your writing is very good, though, so it makes up for it |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very cute. She breaks your heart, and then wants you back, and you don't want to go. Nice. |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow. u have great word expression; i like it a lot. do u tend to write from experience? just curious. oh and thank u for ur review by the way 'luv. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey i really like this one, i dont know if you've heard of mike skinner and "the streets"? but this sounds a lot like one of his lyrics! I'm not too fond of rhyming "in" with "in" but it works in that way |
![]() ![]() ![]() the point is short and sweet...and it has a sense of a feeling to be forgotten. good good |
![]() ![]() ![]() She calls in. She's balling. I tell her to quit stalling ... you mean bawling or bailing? I lay awake for her calling.. lie I absolutely love the rhyming! its amazing... very sad ending but somewhat hopeful |