Reviews for a wink, a drink and a look
E.M. Laicrist chapter 1 . 2/23/2005
Love how you wrote it out.
D S Rollins chapter 1 . 6/18/2004
Very interesting. I love the rhyming couplets in each line. Entertaining!
Short and sweet i say )
hehe, i hope you get a chance to review some of my recent work.
Alowicious Hildenbrand chapter 1 . 6/16/2004
I just looked back at the shows you've been to, and it made this poem make sense...Very Emo *winces* Your writing is very good, though, so it makes up for it
Arcania chapter 1 . 6/16/2004
Very cute. She breaks your heart, and then wants you back, and you don't want to go. Nice.
A. Doppelganger chapter 1 . 6/13/2004
wow. u have great word expression; i like it a lot. do u tend to write from experience? just curious. oh and thank u for ur review by the way 'luv.
A Cynic on Acid chapter 1 . 6/13/2004
Hey i really like this one, i dont know if you've heard of mike skinner and "the streets"? but this sounds a lot like one of his lyrics! I'm not too fond of rhyming "in" with "in" but it works in that way
Mikalah D chapter 1 . 6/9/2004
the point is short and sweet...and it has a sense of a feeling to be forgotten. good good
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 6/4/2004
She calls in. She's balling. I tell her to quit stalling
... you mean bawling or bailing?
I lay awake for her calling.. lie
I absolutely love the rhyming! its amazing... very sad ending but somewhat hopeful