Reviews for Promise
Kanarali chapter 1 . 7/3/2004
That is a nice poem for people who brake promises. I think that it it great. keep writing.
Shinji Boi69 chapter 1 . 6/7/2004
Why?I kidding. This is cool and you took a very good approach when you wrote this poem. Keep up the great work and never stop writing!Writing kicks!
Jake
Peace out
vanburen chapter 1 . 6/6/2004
It was a nice change reading such a long poem. It shows that you put lots of thought into what you write. One thing I'd like to note is; if you are going to write an ABAB rhyme-scheme poem, it has to play the whole way throught. For example, the words "cure" and "here" don't really rhyme all that well. Other than that, nicely done.
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 6/3/2004
nice poem.
Kara Rose Trojan chapter 1 . 6/3/2004
Its awesome! Kick ass! Keep on writing!