|Reviews for Promise|
| Kanarali chapter 1 . 7/3/2004
That is a nice poem for people who brake promises. I think that it it great. keep writing.
| Shinji Boi69 chapter 1 . 6/7/2004
Why?I kidding. This is cool and you took a very good approach when you wrote this poem. Keep up the great work and never stop writing!Writing kicks!
| vanburen chapter 1 . 6/6/2004
It was a nice change reading such a long poem. It shows that you put lots of thought into what you write. One thing I'd like to note is; if you are going to write an ABAB rhyme-scheme poem, it has to play the whole way throught. For example, the words "cure" and "here" don't really rhyme all that well. Other than that, nicely done.
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| Kara Rose Trojan chapter 1 . 6/3/2004
Its awesome! Kick ass! Keep on writing!