Reviews for Try To Shake Me
On Mercury chapter 1 . 11/23/2004
Great poem! Good imagery and clear statements to those who oppress.

Take care.

OM

PS: my fave line:

Take whatever shots you want.

Try it.

But it's not going to knock me down.

Not this time.
singingspeechless chapter 1 . 7/12/2004
this was beautiful and so inspiring! (p.s.- I am so glad to hear that there's another one of us on this site that are Christians! we need to keep spreading the message of Christ to as many ppl as we can. w/love, your sis in Christ Jesus, babyOrion16)
Lynnie-Pooh chapter 1 . 6/20/2004
wow...this is good I like it! keep writing!
marshbar960 chapter 1 . 6/3/2004
wow! overprotective parents..tell me about it...loved how you portrayed your thoughts and emotions w/in the poem..thanks for sharing and keep writing!
Getuie chapter 1 . 6/3/2004
*hugs* Amen!