Reviews for Disappearing Soul
invalid id chapter 1 . 6/5/2004
Good as always :).
Shinji Boi69 chapter 1 . 6/5/2004
Wow. This is so cool. i keep getting blown away by your poetry. Oh, i saw the bio today and your goals seem so much more realistic. No offence. Back to the poem. The way you ended it was so beautifully written. It left the emotions lingering in my mind. Great job.
Jake
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 6/4/2004
wonderful, again! your lines are so long, im thinking of making mine longer as well, lol! nah, but very nice piece. i know what you mean about having someone who does so much for you yet they dont really know it. it's the same with my older bro. i think i gots an idea for a poem! *runs away*...
danny chapter 1 . 6/4/2004
you're free! yippee!