Reviews for When I'm Being Like This
Ikuisuuden Teiden Kulkija chapter 1 . 6/30/2004
Really good lyrics ;-)
Eirien chapter 1 . 6/24/2004
I like this song, would love to hear the melody to it. ;-) Especially the refrain is very powerful, it can be hell sometimes to have to stand oneself, and one wishes they could escape from their own person, but it'S something you can never get rid of, guess we just have to accept it. Or concentrate on loving others and leave those twisted selves in God's hands ... I like the rhythm of your song as well. I could picture it being performed by a band like Evanescence for instance. Good job.
Shinji Boi69 chapter 1 . 6/5/2004
I can see a pattern here. I'm lovin' it. I wish I could hear this song. I just love people who write their own music. I'm great at composing but lyrics aren't really my thing. I try though. Anyway, This is really good. I applaud your creativity and your talent. Word to your mother dawg and all that other overly used slang that i can't understand yo.
Your loyal reviewer,
Jake (the shinji boi) out.
(pache, frieden, de vrede, la paz,)peace, my friend.
I'm weird. get over it. Keep up the great work.
CoolBeans18s chapter 1 . 6/4/2004
*applauds* Bravo! This has great rhymth and flow - perfect for such a song as this! I was humming to myself as I read it. Very well done!
~ CoolBeans18s