Reviews for The Reinvenion of Imperfection |
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Mac Attack chapter 1 . 6/6/2004 nice poem. Little sad. Little morbid. Pretty morbid actually. Pretty too. Nice. Nice Kat. I am watching Eurotrip. It is dumb. But funny. Good poem though. Is this about you? I hope not. Cuz then you would be dead. Oh well. I know your not dead. I'm talking to you. Ok well read mine now. Good job i liked alot. |
Hangman chapter 1 . 6/5/2004 This has to be one of the most beautiful things Ive ever read. It may be partially due to the fact that Radiohead is playing and 2 of my friends feel like dying and Im depressed, but I love this poem. I know you get lots of reviews about how good your work is, and Id love to contradict just because of my nature, but I cant find fault in this poem. The subject matter is beautiful and the ending just finishes it off cleanly. Nicely written. Cam |