Reviews for Mistake
Kev chapter 1 . 6/6/2004
aw...jenna...u make me want to watch a real sad movie. Can I just ask who this is about? He must be a real special guy for u to feel this way...
ciara cathleen chapter 1 . 6/5/2004
very nice. straight forward. you are a silly little girl jenna and i love you to death. keep up the writing so i can keep reading. stop by my fp page if you'd like. bye!
123456789gone chapter 1 . 6/5/2004
I get the feeling that a large number of people will gloss over this. But to people like me who know what you mean. Who know how you feel, it's a really good poem. It means a lot to me right now actually.
Technically, the only thing I can fault you on is the lack of punctuation at the end of lines, save for the question marks. It would just help it to flow that little bit better.
Other than that, I am rather impressed.