Reviews for All Alone
Manuel Fajar chapter 1 . 5/29/2005
Into blue sea we are cast from our birth,

Into waves crashing headlong to far shores,

Into storms unbidden loosened thunder,

Into dissonance from separation,

To lose strong anchor which our heart had fast,

To long for feelings were so real past,

To loose soul's bindings those ropes all cast,

To love and enter into domains vast,

In this red heart proclaims there's Victory,

In this clear soul exclaims there's Ecstasy,

In this mind knows it avoids Penury.
KaseyLovesNoOne chapter 1 . 6/13/2004
Relatable once again... Sad once again... I love it once again...
AmethystTrish chapter 1 . 6/10/2004
i really liked this one. something many of us can relate to, i'm sure. great job!
SeaVoi chapter 1 . 6/9/2004
I like this one, i can relate to it. :)
Romantic Squirrel chapter 1 . 6/6/2004
Well I wish I could be there...
This is a good poem, I liked the way it flowed, very fluently.
Shadowz the Silver Wolf chapter 1 . 6/5/2004
It's good...I like it
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 6/5/2004
wow... thats beautiful! i love it a lot... i love the last 2 lines especially. wonderfl job, deserves a favs.
SamaraTheBloodDraindRose chapter 1 . 6/5/2004
o! i wrote 1 like this called Isolation! ha! pls email me at because todays my last day with internet, and i wont be able to talk to you or write and im so osad! but i will miss reading ur stuff or writing and you reviewing mine! ugh!
Sang Yu Nung chapter 1 . 6/5/2004
Nicely written~ I like how you just tuned out and could only hear " ." and how then u talked about "you" (the person) so the reader could pick up that there was only one problem, but in the end u still said it 4 others who didn't understand - super!
Raven Gray chapter 1 . 6/5/2004
i know how how you feel...great poem keep up the good work