Reviews for Mistakes
N47R3 chapter 1 . 8/12/2004
i've never been at odds with a friend like this. i don't let friends close enough for it... i want to, but i don't. You're the only one i bring close it seems... You've never given me reason to feel like this. _-nuzzle-_ and i'm glad. good poem, i can feel You venting.
lauren chapter 1 . 8/8/2004
i really like this one. very honest and emotional. the end is kind of disappointing, tho. it would be better if you said 'now i'm broken' or something.
*lauren*
swift sky silver chapter 1 . 7/5/2004
i like the emotion put into this poem. you did a good job 0)
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 6/6/2004
mistakes... god have i made so many of those... nice words!