Reviews for Mistakes
N47R3 chapter 1 . 8/12/2004
i've never been at odds with a friend like this. i don't let friends close enough for it... i want to, but i don't. You're the only one i bring close it seems... You've never given me reason to feel like this. _-nuzzle-_ and i'm glad. good poem, i can feel You venting.
lauren chapter 1 . 8/8/2004
i really like this one. very honest and emotional. the end is kind of disappointing, tho. it would be better if you said 'now i'm broken' or something.
swift sky silver chapter 1 . 7/5/2004
i like the emotion put into this poem. you did a good job 0)
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 6/6/2004
mistakes... god have i made so many of those... nice words!