Reviews for You Suit Me
Evangeline chapter 1 . 10/2/2004
First, I'd like to thank you for reviewing my poem, "Asylum".
I really enjoy the simplicity of this piece. It has very striking patterns and manages to be sentimental without being unbearably sappy/weepy. The emotion came naturally and didn't seem at all forced.
The only criticism I have is that the last line, "and let me be me", seemed a little sparse. I don't really know of any other way to end it, but I thought you might find it useful to know that the ending just seemed a tad anticlimatic.
Again, thank you for the review.
PaintedHorse chapter 1 . 9/22/2004
Cool. This is really nice. I like it. That you for reviewing my story.
Keep up the good work!
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 6/9/2004
I can defiantely realte to that.. very sweet I like it
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 6/5/2004
wow, beautifully done!