Reviews for With me
marshbar960 chapter 1 . 6/6/2004
good work! i also like this poem..especially the chorus and the bridge..i can also relate to this have an excellent talent in writing so keep it up!
AmethystTrish chapter 1 . 6/6/2004
beautiful! absolutely beautiful!
"I don't want million roses
I don't want billion skies
I just want your honesty
When you look into my eyes"
i just love those lines! i can totally relate. awesome job, as always! ;-)
Written In Stone chapter 1 . 6/6/2004
This is a really good song. I can relate to this... U sound like me with the "I'll give you a cookie." In ur authors note at the top. lol. Please keep writhing and I'll keep reading.
lil-Steph chapter 1 . 6/6/2004
This is a great song. I can sort of relate... not really, but in the past, I could have. Keep writing.
LuvAnjel01 chapter 1 . 6/5/2004
WOW! that was really cool. I wish i could write songs...then again i never tried. very cool.
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 6/5/2004
that was so damn beautiful! amazing even! :D
Raven Gray chapter 1 . 6/5/2004
WOW!...this is amazing!...i feel just like this right now so i can totally relate and understand!...once again WOW! FANTASTIC JOB! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK! :)