|Reviews for being caught in the middle of a loselosesituation|
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 7/11/2004
I might clal it this time
I know this feeling well.. I like it! nicely done!
| Arcania chapter 1 . 6/16/2004
Nice. Telling two people you care for and know well to grow up already, school's over. Very good. At least you realize something they didn't.
| chocolatecreme06 chapter 1 . 6/7/2004
Tough situation to be in :S i like it even though its not ur usual style.
| kalariah chapter 1 . 6/6/2004
It's hard being in the middle, isn't it? Both people expect you to side with them, and neutrality isn't an option.
I really like this one; the style is a bit different from what you usually do, and it seems a lot calmer. Breaking it into sections like that really enhances what you have to say. Saying "this time" gives a feeling of continuation, of weariness caused by endless repetition of actions.
Looking at the last few works you've put out, I think you grew up & matured while I wasn't looking. Your writing's always been excellent, but the attitude expressed within them before seemed to lack understanding of other people. Now.. I am impressed more than ever before.
And also, I'm sorry I haven't been reviewing much lately. I hardly ever get on FPC anymore. I still am in awe of your writing skills, and I hope you write a lot more.