Reviews for Crushing a Carpet of Truths
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 6/13/2004
sorry i didnt review this before, never got an alert for it and yeah. but wow, nice piece :) as usual. and yeha, dads are hard to get along with, hate mine, lol
Autumn tears chapter 1 . 6/11/2004
Wonderful, I loved tehformatting of dying and falling at the beginning and end. Actually I was really amazed at the length of this- and that you were able to keep my attention through the whole thing. (I'm not one for long poems) BUt I didn't realize how much I had read until I was done, I was so into it. Wonderful, wonderful. My favorite line was definately,
"You've sent my soul through your metaphorical paper shredder"
Probably because paper shredders have always scared me. They're rather powerful really... and then the use of "soul" instead of "heart" People, even poets, often confuse the two for being the same, but they aren't. Again, great job.
invalid id chapter 1 . 6/7/2004
Again, just wow...powerfully emotional and filled with just wow, I can't think of what to say.
Shinji Boi69 chapter 1 . 6/7/2004
This poem is very emotional. I loved the appearence of "Falling" it was creative. The repitition was also very well thought out. Great job and keep up the good work. I hope everything works out well in the end for you.
Jake. (bye for now)
danny chapter 1 . 6/6/2004
i like the letters going down- it's cool
WakeRobin chapter 1 . 6/6/2004
That is a dark poem. I hope it helped you feel better. This shows a lot of emotions. I can relate to it sometimes.