Reviews for I'll be
Tatsu-Dreamer chapter 1 . 8/28/2004
this is really good. I wish someone felt that way about me. the rythm was a little off, and some of the rhymes were forced a bit, but still the poem touches you where it counts. very nice.
this revolution chapter 1 . 6/28/2004
Really good poem, I wish I had someone like that.
dark55angel chapter 1 . 6/27/2004
How sweet. Since I know you in person, this is shocking coming from you.
Sash-romancefreak chapter 1 . 6/7/2004
Cool. You like love poetry, huh?
LiL Angel with Wings chapter 1 . 6/6/2004
Aw so sweet! This is good. It reminds me of that song "I'll Be", but I don'tk now who sings it... But n-e-wayz, good job!
~ Dreamer to Fly ~
Cougar Draven chapter 1 . 6/6/2004
We stand
being there for our girls
we proclaim our love for them
in front'a the whole damn world
It's life
being there for your baby
'cuz without them near
make ya whole world crazy
Nice, nice, nice. The Random Freestyles are back! Check, check, check, gimme tha fuckin' mic! Anyway, keep it up, dawg.
kikki07 chapter 1 . 6/6/2004
wow, that was kool, you can rhyme very well. i can't, but thats ok. i really like your stuff Ü