|Reviews for Most Times|
| Sights Unseen chapter 1 . 6/6/2004
Ok, Wow...Have you been living my life day to day and feeling how I have? A
its easy to lie,
to wait till i
get home to cry.
haha that sounds like just the other day when I was perfectly fine, The evil one (exboyfriend) gave me a hug at the end of the day ad i was perfectly perfect until walking home from the bus and yep, there came those tears...anyways, Great poem, sorry I got distracteda nd just told you my life story, keep writing because it's gotta get better sometime (I hope) - Melissa
| arbysauce93 chapter 1 . 6/6/2004
I really like this. Great idea, and the first and last line of the stanzas are great how the contrast. I especially like the very last line. leaves you with a lot to think about. Great job and keep up the good work!