Reviews for Peter Pan Dreams |
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![]() ![]() ![]() always loved peter pan. I never really liked the ending though and you captured that really well. lovely imagery aswell. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Reminds me of "Hook" with Robin Williams, I love that movie. Thanks for the happy memories. ~bless. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww that was so cute! I like the transition from happy to angsty, it was well done. Nice job, you're great with rhymes, they are too finicky for me to write, but I love to read them. Great job ~ Thanks for reviewing my poem! Yay to my first reviewer for "Loneliness!" _ Cookies for you! _ Ttyl... ..::Jewel::.. |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice! i really like it, especially since i'm a big fan of Peter Pan! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I absolutely love Peter Pan! great poem! the second to last line is wonderful. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i like the turn from happy to sad. like everythings going ok and then it isnt. very pretty ~De~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() :-) this poem is great! lol, i never wanna grow up.. yourdownfall |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow, i saw this movie...it was pretty good! lovely poem though! its really good |
![]() ![]() ![]() Twas happy! then it was sad...but in any case it was very good! The words flowed wonderfully that they did. Great work! ~ Little Dog Muse |