Reviews for the AfterJob
Lionheart21 chapter 4 . 5/12/2005
another great chapter. keep up the good work.
Lionheart21 chapter 3 . 5/12/2005
wow i'm really into this story. i like your dialogue a lot.
Lionheart21 chapter 2 . 5/12/2005
nice story. mister is a great character. i want to see what happens next. :)
Lionheart21 chapter 1 . 5/12/2005
wow this is really cool. i like the subtle humor in it. it makes you think.
Tallow chapter 4 . 7/3/2004
I love your writing style. It reminds me of the way the Discworld and Xanth series were written out.
Coltsith chapter 4 . 7/2/2004
I like this. The only thing that was a bit confusing was the middle of the forth chapter. Other than that it's great.
Erin chapter 2 . 7/2/2004
I really like you're relaxed style of writing and find it very funny. But the only thing that bugs me is Mister Bob's name. It just doesn't fit. At least give him a creditable last name.
Fandinango chapter 3 . 7/1/2004
Teekle! Thanks for updating :D
Another marvelous chapter! The only problem was that.. it was too short - hehe :P (thats your constructive criticism - you need to write and write and write... just for me) :D
I love your sceptical sense of sarcastic humour, it comes across really well - the plot, the word choice, the sentence construction have all captured the essence of the story. And that adds so much more to the reading experience - it makes us think you really know what you are doing... or at least, are very talented :D
Well done.
I'm sad to hear you are going away - only because I am selfish and want you to write more :)
Looking forward to your update!
Oh.. stretch out your hands, by flexing them out, stretching all fingers, then rolling them in and out - maybe use a stress ball after that. THEN - soak your hands in a bowl of warm water and relax, and then rub some yummy moisturiser into them. And then you'll feel better. :D
Philip Ellis chapter 2 . 6/29/2004
Very reminiscent of Dead Like Me, but I like the sarcasm and dark wit throughout. Keep it going!
Samara Morgan-Ring chapter 2 . 6/29/2004
Fandinango chapter 2 . 6/29/2004
Teekle teekle teekle.. darling teekle-y...
you simply must continue! You must update.. at once! For I am enjoying this story so much. It's great. Well written, good choice or words, sharp sarcastic wit, interesting topic, funny, very novel take on the afterlife.
Its brilliant.
This story is going on my favs list -and I WILL (repeat: WILL) be back to check for more updates. :D :D
Thanks doll,
Luv ~Ice
LuthienLuin chapter 1 . 6/8/2004
Great start - more plz!
I want to know more about her character too, like what she did when she was alive. I wonder what kind of job she'd want?
Samara Morgan-Ring chapter 1 . 6/7/2004
This is good, it also sounds like a rip off of Dead Lke Me, but since they dont air that anymore KEP GGOOIINNGG
WingedAssassin chapter 1 . 6/7/2004
Great little piece. It's got potential. Good start!
RedHotHope chapter 1 . 6/7/2004
i think it's good. with a little more character developement, it will make a great story. continue!