Reviews for Me Without You
softlycryingrain chapter 1 . 6/7/2004
that was really great! I love all of the comparisons, or pictures, similes? whatever you want to call them...
I really enjoy your work! keep it up!
Watershoot chapter 1 . 6/7/2004
Good poem, interesting rhyme scheme, which I like... something a bit different. Though on the third line do you mean "like a marathon without the run" rather than "with the run"? And also, the last line of each stanza "it's just like me without you" doesn't really work as well in the last verse... Its good work and I really enjoyed it...
Sillygoose49 chapter 1 . 6/7/2004
Wow. You've got me bawling on that one. Incredible. I can't wait until I have more time to read more of your work.
P.S.: check out some of my work if you have time! please!