Reviews for Talon Royals: Skyler
englishsushi chapter 1 . 6/16/2004
Not a bad start, however it would make more sense if Shayde had planned it all along, not made an impulsive decision-because he would have to have thought about the fact that he looked a little like Skinner to begin with...
The fast wire yanking bit seemed a little...hard to believe that it went so unnoticed.
sevendeadlypings chapter 1 . 6/9/2004
This is pretty good. Update soon!
W3DNESDAY chapter 1 . 6/7/2004
woop-di-doo, chock full of suspense and intrigue
can't wait to see what happens, and i'd like to commend you on ur names! they rock! (i especially like spinner's name)
i hope you update soon. i don't have any criticism besides about this part of a sentence: "Relieved that he had been able to deactivate the Scanner, but anxious about whether or not it had worked"
it doesnt really make sense bc.. he knows he's deactivated it..then why would he be anxious about it not working? ..it's probably just a typo, the rest of your story is great!