Reviews for Tears
writerforever chapter 1 . 11/7/2005
Wow, powerful poem. Wonderful job. The strange thing is that my best friend's name was Chris and he deserted me so I could relate to this poem very much.
nick-wordsmith chapter 1 . 12/5/2004
I like this alot because the short sentances have a powerful impact. The last stanza is great. It's powerful and ties it all up.

-Stones decay, words lastNick
WriterOfDragons chapter 1 . 7/15/2004
oh my god i'm am so sorry for your loss is there anything i can do you may not kow me but i would feel bad if i couldn't help with ppls problems
cinderella-ashes chapter 1 . 6/27/2004
losing someone, as you know, I can relate, but the way you phrase this is very good.
BluEyes1 chapter 1 . 6/25/2004
You can keep the tears/ I only want you back. those last 2 lines almost made me cry! theres something about ur writing style that almost reminds me of mine...im not really sure exactly what it is, though...but anyway, this was also a great poem :)
stripey13 chapter 1 . 6/23/2004
hey this is so awesome whut is a beta?