Reviews for While I Swim
1941 chapter 1 . 6/8/2004
I am a swimmer and can relate to a lot of this. I like it, though I must say you obviously are not swimming the butterfly stroke. You give good visualization to the reader.
Bragi chapter 1 . 6/8/2004
I can't say I really like this poem, but I'm a swimmer and I get it. You think about things when there's chlorine leaking into your brain. Go swimmers!