Reviews for Remembering
Leo chapter 1 . 6/21/2004
This is so good (SNIFF) (SNIFF)
Great work!1
nesy chapter 1 . 6/11/2004
Whatever you think, to me it's pretty good. I wish I could forget, too.
Clouden3 chapter 1 . 6/11/2004
Now this is magnificient. It reminds me of Emily Dickinson's famous poem "Heart, We Will Forget Him!" and this is really good, you work well when you're bored
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 6/9/2004
hehe nice poem. though i must say that adding that list at the bottom kinda distracts from the poem. but i know what you mean by adding it there. its still a great poem! ;) nice job!
marshbar960 chapter 1 . 6/8/2004
hey! i liked this poem...although i believe it has just a little more potential. for example, you may want to try reconsidering the line "i promised myself this promise"...just a suggestion, though, i hope it doesn't break your heart. anyway thanks for sharing and keep writing!
p.s. maybe you and i can email each other back and forth and become very good friends, even though i'm considerably younger than you are!
Written In Stone chapter 1 . 6/8/2004
This is really well written and I can totaly relate big time. Please keep up the good writing. Later _