|Reviews for wake up, sleeping beauty|
| IHJ chapter 1 . 6/16/2004
I like the contrast between antiquity and apathy. Somehow I think if you gave an example of the something "much [much] more" than "the embrace of a handsome warrior" that would wake her up, it would have more of a flow in the idea/structure.
Dark, morbid imagery well used, especially as it progress to the end. The structure's nice and inclusion of words/phrases in brackets works quite well. :)
| icarus girl chapter 1 . 6/8/2004
when you're the only beautiful thing left
in a world filled with ugliness?
i love it, its such a twist.