this is scarily (i mean NIGHTMARISH) good.
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but it's so KWEL!

very good...an interesting idea...interesting imagery...pull out your skin and wrap your soul and my safe...very cool

powerful. a painful yet sensual sting. get what i mean? maybe i make no sense. i love it. you did use quite strong words... and it's absolutely fantastic.
-love, enat

That was perfect and scary at the same time! :O Also, thank you for writing the poem for me! I could have never thought something that interesting up about my screen name..wow!

Wow. It poses that same question that has been asked by many people for a long time- "if loving you is wrong, than why does it feel so good?"
Excellent job, its short and makes you think.

this is so cool. When are you going to publishing your works ike Christine Redman-Wa... i forget her name.

I like it a lot...great job!

Wow! What to say what to say... Dang... I loved it! I love all your stuff! You're amazing.
Sterces

Lol this is excellent! I love the tone of it and the way you right. Never thought truely loving one with no strings attached could be such a sin before. Nice religious imagery well done you have much talent!

well written! nice work!

thats... interesting

This is pretty deep. I loved the desriptions and the imagery. Great work.

You know, I'm not ashamed to admit (not one bit!) that sometimes your superior vocabulary requires me to reach for the dictionary. I learned a new word today: sacrilegious. Go me!

You possess a grand gift for writing, most notably, the use of metaphors. Go you!

-tofujunky

Very, very powerful. That may sound cliche and pathetic, but it's true. You have such an awesome way of making such an impact in 5 or 6 lines.
I love reading your work, this piece especially!

oh, i absolutely loved that- wonderful work, as always! the idea was beatifully expressed, and i esp. liked your images- "I wrap your naked soul around my face,/Until I suffocate myself, for my mortal sin."