Reviews for Without Me
Any1there4me chapter 1 . 11/25/2007
This poem is exceptional...did you write this from a personal experience?

Baobei.13 chapter 1 . 7/14/2007
This is so deep. Great work and I love the thoughts I see inbetween the lines.
CarpeDiem28 chapter 1 . 9/11/2005
I like this poem even more. It is so good. Simple words explain the "unsimple feelings"
loversdream17 chapter 1 . 4/17/2005
great job i think it is one of your best if not your best keep up the good work. Love Always and Forever
Anna178 chapter 1 . 12/29/2004
This is very good, beautiful. You're very talented, keeps it
ForgottenLover chapter 1 . 10/30/2004
wow... keep up the excellent work!
SleepDontWeep chapter 1 . 8/4/2004
very prettyful! i like ur style its wonderfullu unique! x
much love x
please review some of my stuff! x:)
nesy chapter 1 . 8/2/2004
A really beautiful poem, I can relate to this. I loved it.
ShorelineWind chapter 1 . 7/24/2004
Interesting style of poetry. :) Sometimes it sounded like you had carefully formed meters and other times it sounded like unformed freeverse.
I like it! (More because this touches the center of my life. I know how love can be sometimes.)
Great job and keep writing,
BrokenLover chapter 1 . 6/22/2004
wow. That's really deep! awesome poem! I love it. I can actually relate. I know it's hard for a person to leave another but ofcourse you only think for the best.
WakeRobin chapter 1 . 6/9/2004
Sweet poem. I like it!
Stephen Fierce Publications chapter 1 . 6/9/2004
I'm not big on love poems, but that wasn't bad.
P.S Can you review my poem called "With Love Comes Guilt"?
Unchained Soul chapter 1 . 6/9/2004
I know EXACTLY how this feels... I've been feeling like this about someone for about a month now, then last night I realized I couldn't leave cuz love is worth it. It's true, it's common to mistake lust for love, but it's also easy to mistake love for lust. Don't kid yourself, if love is there it's there, and the blindness, confusion, and distraction is worth it. Neways great poem, I'm sure a lot of people can relate. WEll done.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 6/9/2004
I can relate to some of it... its very bittersweet and nicely written
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 6/9/2004
wow *claps* about times you updated! ive been waiting for it ;) amazing job and it was worth the wait since its such a good poem! so sad and great!