Reviews for My Happy Ending |
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![]() ![]() I really loved this story, from start to finish, but in the end (my god, I feel silly saying this) I can't help thinking that Caroline and Justin shouldn't have ended up together |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really enjoyed this story! I only have one comment though - there were so many names starting with c that I became confused, but I think that might be my fault because I'm horrible at remembering names, especially that of characters. Cheers TQL |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm loving this story so far. I had a gut feeling it would be set in Australia and now it's confirmed. As an Aussie myself, I take pride in reading stories set in Aus. Are you Australian? Cheers TQL |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved this! I thought it was a really cute story. I loved Justin and Caroline and I'm really glad everyone found someone |
![]() ![]() ![]() I did not like this story. The writing was okay, though there were lots of mistakes (but what are editors for, right?). I was frustrated throughout the story. I liked Caroline, but I couldn't accept Justin. He seemed... fickle. Maybe he had depth, but I didn't get it, so... Anyway, I kind of got sick halfway through the story, but I finished it. The ending was happy. Wow, that was unexpected (sarcasm here). The storyline was a bit complicated for a person of limited patience (myself). However, there were moments that made me laugh and I appreciated that. I guess that is all. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The beginning seems kind of slow but I'm sure it'll pick up :) I'm liking it so far and can't wait to continue |
![]() ![]() ![]() I enjoyed reading your story. My only complaint is he didn't really show that he had any intrest in her until he finally told her. By chapter 15 I was hoping something might happen between her and Scott more than her and Justin. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome story! I'm living in Melbourne as well, and it's nice to read something that is non-American for once! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story, keep up the good work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() ah.. I'm thoroughly confused.. I don't know.. justin, jake, or scott? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay... i REALLY want scott and CK to end up together! tell me it's not wishful thinking lol! |
![]() ![]() ![]() loved it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lord, but your stories are addicting! Not so good when you have to get up early the next morning though, haha. |
![]() ![]() ![]() shifty eyes indeed! I love ya! ...and your story of course xx |
![]() ![]() ![]() i totally love this story! i just kinda wished it was scott and CK but oh well. great job and continue writting! |