Reviews for My Happy Ending |
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![]() ![]() hey, just a quick note to say I'm really liking how this story is turning out. I have read Loved Forever too, and thought you did a fairly good job with it but I have a feeling this one will be ten times better! ~moni |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh I really like the beginning of this! I'll be back to read more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() you know, i think i like this story better than loved forever. though they're both great. once again, my eyes hurt too much to leave a longer review... sorry. excellent story. update again soon? |
![]() ![]() update soon. i can't wait to see what happens next. Update your other story to. till the next chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey. I think its a little hard to read and there are a lot of little errors( like my instead of me.) but other then that i like it a lot! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ooh, interesting. I can’t wait to read more, so please update soon! ~ Aria |
![]() ![]() ![]() Don't feel bad about suckin at snowboarding. I suck at EVERYTHING on a board... I can't sled. Heck, I can't even boogie board... Sad, huh? Great job on this chapter. It was more paced, and it was entertaining. I like that you didn't make CK very Mary-Sue-ish by making her uber great at surfing or trashketball. And yes, I made that word up. ;) More, please. |
![]() ![]() ![]() haha Great start. lol I can't help but laugh at the last line. |
![]() ![]() Well, I must say that I enjoyed this story and am waiting for an update! It reminds me a little of Bend It Like Beckham...and I needed a good romance story! UPDATE FOR THE FANS! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is getting fun! I can't wait till the summer is over and she finds out that Milano is going to her school! Ou have have to write more as soon as possible. Again...ASAP! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like this idea, even though it's one of those quintessential summer stories, but you're moving a little fast. I think you should spend a little longer developing characters before moving into the "fast-action" stuff. Write more, please. |