Reviews for My Happy Ending
moni chapter 2 . 6/16/2004
hey, just a quick note to say I'm really liking how this story is turning out. I have read Loved Forever too, and thought you did a fairly good job with it but I have a feeling this one will be ten times better!
a e i o u and sometimes y chapter 1 . 6/15/2004
Oh I really like the beginning of this! I'll be back to read more!
Midnight Owl chapter 2 . 6/15/2004
you know, i think i like this story better than loved forever. though they're both great. once again, my eyes hurt too much to leave a longer review... sorry. excellent story. update again soon?
anonymous chapter 2 . 6/15/2004
update soon. i can't wait to see what happens next. Update your other story to. till the next chapter.
PCS chapter 2 . 6/15/2004
Hey. I think its a little hard to read and there are a lot of little errors( like my instead of me.) but other then that i like it a lot!
Arialla chapter 2 . 6/15/2004
Ooh, interesting. I can’t wait to read more, so please update soon!
~ Aria
You Need More Flair chapter 2 . 6/15/2004
Don't feel bad about suckin at snowboarding. I suck at EVERYTHING on a board... I can't sled. Heck, I can't even boogie board...
Sad, huh?
Great job on this chapter. It was more paced, and it was entertaining.
I like that you didn't make CK very Mary-Sue-ish by making her uber great at surfing or trashketball.
And yes, I made that word up. ;)
More, please.
annchick1273 chapter 1 . 6/13/2004
haha Great start. lol I can't help but laugh at the last line.
Finnigan Irish chapter 1 . 6/12/2004
Well, I must say that I enjoyed this story and am waiting for an update! It reminds me a little of Bend It Like Beckham...and I needed a good romance story! UPDATE FOR THE FANS!
kassiopia59 chapter 1 . 6/9/2004
This is getting fun! I can't wait till the summer is over and she finds out that Milano is going to her school! Ou have have to write more as soon as possible. Again...ASAP!
You Need More Flair chapter 1 . 6/9/2004
I like this idea, even though it's one of those quintessential summer stories, but you're moving a little fast. I think you should spend a little longer developing characters before moving into the "fast-action" stuff.
Write more, please.
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