Reviews for Addiction II
Fuinixe chapter 1 . 3/27/2005
Oh, this is awesome. Way better than the original Addiction. I love "Just as sweet a world to explore/Smiles and laughs but nothing more." Concise and sassy! D

Sabbrielle
lalamushu chapter 1 . 6/10/2004
this poem could use stanzas. even if they have odd line amounts in them, i think stanzas would really build the structure. _ the word "chapters" has one teeny weeny typo, and it's that an apostrophe could be put between the "r" and "s". sorry to give you a nit picky review, when you gave me a good one. i feel really bad about that. keep up the good work though!
ROMAN EMPEROR chapter 1 . 6/10/2004
All of it works can hold its on as good poetry but mayb its even better as a whole. The perfection is there in seperation and together, but difernent perfection. Great work(s)!