|Reviews for Outside MakeBelieve|
| Amethyst Horizon chapter 1 . 6/13/2004
i love this poem! you're going to make me cry! it's so incredibly sweet! wonderful job! this just might beat "Tomorrow"...might being the key word...
| UnShure Dreamer chapter 1 . 6/10/2004
Something everyone wants...but no one really gets. good job putting it into words! I like this poem as well!
| Roberta Pryce Robinson chapter 1 . 6/9/2004
A nice write, nicely done! May your fairytale come true! Goddess Bless!
| dpants chapter 1 . 6/9/2004
I like this. This tends to show the hope and optimism that I want to see in you. You deserve better than one that breaks your heart.
| Dante Strife chapter 1 . 6/9/2004
Wow, that is...wow. That describes every experience, that makes love so great, perfectly. Great stuff.