|Reviews for The Suicide Club|
| pennaroyaltea chapter 1 . 10/10/2005
i know i already reveiwed but i was wondering if you got the name from "a seperate peace"? just wondering-enormous loser
| pennaroyaltea chapter 5 . 9/12/2005
hehe that story made me laugh. and though at first i approached it as a suicide story which of course i can relate only so well to, the sci fi was a pleaser as well. oh man i heart johnny depp! and dont worry i have crushes on my charachters too (im an extreme lozer but w/e) and the reason i do is because my characters are always my perfect guy! so natually i devolope a liking for them. (sigh) if only they were real!-enormous lozer
| zakei chapter 5 . 9/12/2005
lol. young adult. lol. ill catch up to it. maybe i'll re-review your chapters? ill go scout ur main webby
| zakei chapter 4 . 9/12/2005
okay fine. so i read the words at the top: fantasy. and i read this chapter on ugly faeries. haha. okay.
your authors notes are kinda homely, but when too long, tend to be a bit... digressive? yeah. uhm.
and the most cliche question, how is this related? ill DEFINATELY wait. dont scream ~~ see im a nice person.
and whos the girl who went missing? the girl he saw at the edge of the woods?
also, im a bit unclear on the part where they enter the forest. why did they enter? to save the girl? how did they know she was captured in the forest?
| zakei chapter 3 . 9/12/2005
still intrducing characters, though threre is a slight hint of a plot. _ i like this story even though it dosent seem sinister. or ra. haha. i like poems~ and i also like the one featured. its so cute. i think on the whole this story is rather cute and punkish. if thats possible. lol. i wonder how you write so differently from indiscriminate creatures. haha.
| zakei chapter 2 . 9/12/2005
oh? i find it amusing. and funny. and a bit to the extreme too, as all your works are. it leans toward the humourous side, as you do know. if ive interpreted anything wrongly, tell me. and is aulyn those kind of prissy rich kids? cause he sounds like one. cossbred with a punk. hahas. oh well, ill keep reading and hopefully give more substantial reviews
p.s. it would be nice if you could reply to this message in a email to my acc. if you dont mind. here goes.
does spelling matter alot in the world of english? should you spell every word perfectly correct, noo matter the circumstance? dont you think its rather nervey and irritating if all you need is something close enough to the word so you can read it? look at this: 'suprise' and 'surprise' will all hell break loose if you spelt it as the first one? GOSH
this set of questions were posed to you cause my english tacher was being such a damn bitch to scold me and my friends publicly in class juat cause even though we wrote best in class, we had the most 'little spelling errors' and she wanted correct atastrophes (this: ' ) and proper double spacing and such. argh. im rambling. sorry. just answer my questions.. thanks
if you think like my teacher, just tell me so. IF.
| zakei chapter 1 . 9/10/2005
ERHS. were you stressed? o_0 nvm. its an interesting story. i'll catch up to the rest tomorrow. im getting tired. and sleepy. you should know. my opinoins come later. im tired. sry.
btw is the guy a like, worrywart? even when i was suspected of doing porn at home (which i did) i didnt worry like that.. ppl who do porn and the like usually can lie at gunpoint easily. (which i still can but dont cuz of family reasons and religious reasons) so, its a bit, say... inconsistent? but oh heck, ill read on.
and yeah, if he could go to the effort of hiding mags and wine and rum etc, wouldnt that take either
a) a whole lot of plotting and a little courage
b) a WHOLE lot of desperation and (last minute) courage with little planning
obviously option b would be exhausted, so i guess ill read on tomorrow. maybe im not sane enough. and my eyes are drooping. night.
| windinthewires chapter 4 . 4/10/2005
Dude. You must. Update. For me? I really need something worth my time, and what-not. Anyway, yes, very entertaining. Farewell.
| BlueAki chapter 4 . 1/22/2005
I realy liked this!
| kaytee chapter 4 . 1/21/2005
good good good good story but i don't understand the title yet...
| The baava Project chapter 1 . 1/20/2005
Hello, OzChild! It's my third night of catching up on my reviews, and I decided it was high time I drop by your library. _ Just to warn you, I do like to be helpful in my reviews, and will therefore nitpick - however, I do not flame, and will not be offended in the slightest should you choose to ignore me. _~
First thing, always type out an ellipse with three periods and four spaces, like this: " . . . " is finicky, and will make your format all messy if you don't watch for that.
[Sitting on the floor of my mother's bathroom.] ~ This sentence is a fragment. Who is doing the sitting, and where is the action? You actually have a few fragments, and I understand that they are part of the rambling, inner-thought style, but this one just jumps out at me as a roadblock.
Those are the two major things I'll pinpoint. There are more . . . a lack of commas, typos, and incorrect punctuation . . . but I don't feel like being VERY mean today. _~
*whistles*All right, you definitely have my attention. I don't think I've read anything out here yet that has started quite like this. All of these thoughts and sensations are wonderfully portrayed, if very, very sad. The last line is killer. I like it very much, and so I shall return!
P.S. Thank you so much for reviewing my story!
| secondlysuspected chapter 4 . 7/1/2004
WoW! *shrieks* That was so cool! Please continue going with this! I've been waiting so long!
| Willers chapter 1 . 6/13/2004
Hey Jam! That was great! The magicness scares me... but this could certainly go somewhere.
Good luck with it _
| secondlysuspected chapter 3 . 6/12/2004
Very good so far. I like the fact that it is so realistic and intricate at the same time. I realize that it is fantasy, but I think it will still be pretty realistic. Keep writing!
| Vagrance chapter 2 . 6/11/2004
I like the cold 'humour' in this story. It kind of reminds me of how I want to make my father BLEED. It's a nice peace of work.