Reviews for Black Rose, White Tips
luv me like no other chapter 1 . 9/17/2006
This is really beautiful.
from beneath the bell jar chapter 1 . 1/17/2006
LOVE IT! So awesome - I wrote one like this but it was tiny tiny. Awesome piece!
Estie the Evil Hobbit chapter 1 . 6/20/2004
I loved this so much! I can definitely relate - people that just watch me from a distance may think that I'm shy (or sometimes plain out mean) but as you so beautifully put it 'Although my exterior is so bleak and dark, it's just a protection.' It's a very heartfelt description of yourself... I can tell you worked hard on it.
MagzRL chapter 1 . 6/11/2004
Very nicely done.
arbysauce93 chapter 1 . 6/10/2004
Nice description. The rose is a beautiful metaphor. The only suggestion that I have is that the line, "But great me gently" doesn't make sense to me. Maybe clarify what you are meaning. Other than that great poem, and keep up the good work!
elvenstorm chapter 1 . 6/10/2004
Such wonderful imagery! I love roses at the best of times but this poem is fantastic. Going on favourite stories list :) Can't really put in words how much i like it so will just say well done you are a beautiful writer!