Woah ... is that a new profile note? ) yeah. love this story but hope you get back the enjoyment of writing or what's the point?

I like the insight on her family life

It shows why she acts the way she does

This story seems interesting so far.

I love the vocabulary you use, very descriptive.

I miss this story.

Saying I like this story would be understatement of the century...This story is seriously that good...and by the number of reviews you recieve, im sure everyone agrees with me...At the beginning of this story, I would have never thought it would turn out this well, but you've exceeded my expectations once again.

Bravo.

BIG FAN!

-kemi

So I've reached chapter twenty-eight of a very engrossing story only to find... nothing.

Well. That did put a slight damper on my otherwise damper-less spirits, you see, because apart from this sudden stoppage of brilliant writing, it was a fairly good story.

Who am I kidding? It's an excellent story; the plot line flows, the characters are exciting and have a wide range of vocabulary, and Em is just... If there were more Em's out there, the world would be a better, smarter (and slightly more cynical) place.

I actually meant to review... well, I meant to review about twenty chapters ago, but I just kept clicking that next button instead of the 'go' button. Itchy mouse finger is what I'm blaming it on, but it also might have something to do with the fact that I'mm hooked on this story.

There are a couple of things I'd like to point out though, and one of them is that sometimes you mix up characters, and also possessive nouns like "he" and "she". I've only noticed it a few times, and maybe the rest are just me being stupid and not realising that you are actually talking about the right character.

The other thing I'd like to say is that you had a "stalker" going after Mona, as well as someone who was watching Em, and he suddenly disappeared somewhere in the last eight or so chapters. Is he still out there, or would that spoil the plot?

Your sentences are wonderfully worded, your vocabulary wide and ranged, and I do remember that at one point you asked if your sentences were too long. My answer is that your style of writing makes the long sentences work, and the way you use words should be an Olympic event. I'm in awe of your word wielding skills, and it's not often that I'm in awe.

I've just checked your last update, and you haven't produced anything new in over a year. This review mightn't even get to you, because you may have renounced the art of writing altogether, but if you do see it, I just want to tell you that I hope you find your muse, inspiration, whatever it is that keeps you going, because this is an excellently written story that has kept me reading for days.

I even pointedly ignored my homework to read it.

Which felt really quite rebellious and pointed out to me exactly how sad my life is.

Oh well!

I hope you still find writing enjoyable, because I'd like to read the rest of this story.

Cookies and other sugar-high inducing goodies (are you inclined to be swayed by bribery?)

Alana

My dear, you are going to have to update. This Prom has lasted long enough and I believe we are all (very) eager to find out what comes next.

Bonne chance (& good luck)!

try updating..

HII!

Are you ever going to update? lol me? rude? naah...

I love your story, it's hilarious and Em is one of the best charcters ever created. I can't wait for more( but i probably will anyway). :P

I'm not trying to be pushy, im just letting you know that people out there still love your story!

I do hope you continue soon! This is such an interesting story. And its not to clich, because usually the main character is in total denial, and people aren't having their own love problems. Em seems really interestin and I can't wait for the next chapter!

I'm thinking you're not coming back ... And I had a feeling that there was going to be some revelations and closure soon.

Hope you're doing well in life and if you're lurking around! Update soon. or at least tell us whats up?

Life happens I guess ... But right at a cliffhanger? It's like chinese water torture. Or Canadian water torture - more modern methods you know. Right, I'm rambling so pip pip cheerio before I say anything more stupid.

I think I can safely proclaim your story as one of the very best I've ever read. Your writing is near to flawless, and I love how it's so intricate. The dialogue and banter between your characters are always delightful, and I often find myself smiling or laughing aloud when I read them. Especially Phillip. XD I read all 28 chapters at one go, and my interest didn't dip once. The beginning was a little slow-paced, but it set the mood of the story. It's nice to see how Em developed over the chapters, from a relatively unfeeling person to a girl with a group of queer friends. Of course, adding Dante to the mix made the storyline pick up quite a bit. :) Anyhow, I love your story to bits and I sincerely cannot wait for your next update.

love it,

take your time but please do finish it :)

Please go on with this story. this is the one of my best stories to follow around, and if you finish it, id be really happy.

This is the only story which reminds me fiction press is not so bad after all...

please continue.