Reviews for Illusions
not sure yet chapter 1 . 8/28/2004
sweet, and yet not, love the last two lines, muchly excellent and intense, awesome job
Gevo chapter 1 . 8/27/2004
Mag ich... Der letzte Vers ist ja wohl ein echter Geniestreich!
Dirty Wallpaper chapter 1 . 8/5/2004
its quite funny, i think i have aquired the state of sleepiness you had when writing my reviews. :( lol. but no, i realy loved this, because seeming as im in a half doze myself, it seemed very real to me and comforting. i loved the simplicity and intdention of the lines...
touch me
kiss me
love me...
they were very effective but soft somehow.
"illusions called by name..."
very wonderful, i loved. kudos!
hole in my heart chapter 1 . 7/27/2004
thx for the review. wow you are really good. this is such a cool poem the last stanza was amazing. nice job.
Jess~
ShorelineWind chapter 1 . 7/24/2004
Wow... Great poem! I love the form- and the last stanza is especially well-formed.
Good job and keep writing!
WhisperBlack chapter 1 . 6/18/2004
you know i've long been a fan of your poems...this one is no exception. i particularly love the last stanza...gorgeous.