|Reviews for Haunted Heart|
| Karkiana chapter 1 . 6/1/2005
I like this one alot! I couldn't quite catch on to the rhyme pattern, but that's ok! it got the message across.
| keltica chapter 1 . 12/8/2004
ah ... a love poem ... and a beautiful one too, this one sincerely touched me ...
keltica, the celtic fire from within
| nesy chapter 1 . 8/27/2004
Really nice piece. I loved that last stanza.
| CF and SB chapter 1 . 6/24/2004
I like this one better. More ryhme, more taste. It's a bitter sweet thing about love.
| deepinthought chapter 1 . 6/14/2004
This is really good. I like the whole loving an invisible thing. It is really cool. Keep your writing up!
| ROMAN EMPEROR chapter 1 . 6/14/2004
Sad and deep, Though you may think its unoriginal, its executed originally
| Julie Poe chapter 1 . 6/11/2004
Another great poem. My favorite part was the last stanza:
"I turned to kiss you heart afire.
You weren't there
Another Phantom of my heart"
Excellent work! Keep on writing!