Wow! from your school stuff, i was prepared for something good...but this was really good! Consider me inspired, Avery. Watch for a forthcoming fantasy epic out of me. And a supernatural one. I have BIG plans for a Heaven vs. Hell story. Really big...

aw... how tragic and abrupt an end for her.

Stupid Alexander. MAKE THE BAD MAN DIE! *STABSTABSTAB*

AWESOME! i love it...keep it up

Oh Gawds Avery, that was wonderful. I love the way how you writing goes so smoothly and as if it's pure instint. Update soon! I can't wait to see what's in store for Damara.

OMG! WRITE MORE... FAST! haha. You have such a professional style of writing, you dont leave many details for the imagination, i like that. The plot is nice as is the way you present it. I like this bad boy. Now write more before i freak out! hehe.

I want to know what happened to her! I wanna know what happened at the church! I wanna werewolf in it! ...Ok, that last one is just my obession with werewolves showing through. Ahem, but I'm good now. Write more! Now! I will make you, you know I will. There, with that threatening message, I end this review.

P.S.: Very good. Write more! Jack Sparrow Rules! (Just following tradition, you know)

Hey! I love this! During the whole time I was reading it, I could imagine a voice with a british accent narrating it. Very realistic and mysterious. You write so well! *frowns at her own writing* You wouldn't happen to have any advice, would you?
Anyways, I can't wait to see what the Elders want with Alex and Damara! I can't wait for your next update!

wow...this just keeps getting better...keep going

I need to pay more attention, I didn't even know you had this here! .
This looks very interesting so far, I hope you update soon!

wow...this is really good

yes, much potential! i think it'll turn into a great story, hope you continue.

It looks like it could turn into a really good story. Get some chapters up and I know I'll read them!

yes, indeed, there is much potetial there, keep writing, please continue, keep it up!