|Reviews for Broken Angel Wings|
| guardien chapter 1 . 7/8/2004
the wind is defenitely sucking the spirit out of me...this poem gets me thinking, nice one!
| Rionarayne chapter 1 . 6/24/2004
I like this one, and it reminds me a little of Evanescence songs. Nice work.
| fRoZeN tIgEr TeArS chapter 1 . 6/17/2004
I really like it!
Ur name's Kayla? Me too!
HOw about using your middle name...
like mine would be Kayla Renee...
or like I have a friend who's Kayla Ann
it'd be neat...
plz check out my stuff if you get the chance! I'd really appreciate it!
| PinkDaydreams chapter 1 . 6/14/2004
hey, thanks for reviewing my poem :O)
i like this poem a lot...its kind of an achingly beautiful poem: sad yet very pretty. id really like to hear it as a song!
| Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 6/11/2004
oh thats really nice as well! i like it tons!
| Sterces chapter 1 . 6/11/2004
*claps* ) Nice flow. I love your poetry. It's yummy!
| marshbar960 chapter 1 . 6/11/2004
very melancholic yet i liked how everything flows, as well as the repitition used to help develop your overall mood. thanks for sharing and keep writing!
| CW-nerd-12 chapter 1 . 6/11/2004
Smile :) lighten up some (a lot).
| The Canines chapter 1 . 6/11/2004
Beautiful! I especially like "Why do halos burn?
Is it such a punishment now?
Such a sin of lover's feminity
Angel's wings are broken
and angel's tears have fallen
Can't understand why
Were all dying inside.
(Please review our story?)
| BERRYLICIOUS chapter 1 . 6/11/2004
this is really pretty, i like it
| zeegurl29 chapter 1 . 6/11/2004
That was really good. I like how it flows.