Reviews for Worth it
Manuel Fajar chapter 1 . 3/30/2006
We went to war without realizing,

Each our enemy,—or their soul's sizing,

But when heart torn into pieces red bleeds,—

You'll know that she ate her cake and icing.


Your tears and my screams make an odd sonic,

Bitter and unresolved this dark tonic,

Emetic for our struggling souls and hearts,—

¿In the end,—don't we both sound moronic?


There was no warning label for this choice,

No little devil with false thoughts to voice,

And of our guardian,—no angel was,

So now, lost love, takes with it all our poise.


There was just a moment to hesitate,

But, action asks us to precipitate,

With boldness and with flair to move forwards;

Then,—many days,—to sad thoughts dedicate.
IcyDevil27 chapter 1 . 6/24/2004
Great poem!
Unchained Soul chapter 1 . 6/13/2004
I know exactly how this feels, and I must comment... it is always worth it, After time. it's true, time DOES heal all wounds... even tho you may not believe it now, trust me it does, took me a year to get over my first love, but my heart healed. And after a while you see that it was all worth it cuz you're left with the good memories and with the experience you've gained from the bed memories, and all those things help you later on. Really good poem, keep writing and we'll keep reading. )
KaseyLovesNoOne chapter 1 . 6/13/2004
I can relate SO well! I really love this piece, as well as all of your writing. Please continue to write D
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 6/11/2004
wow, wonderful poem! thanks for all your reveiews recently, was awaiting you to post so i can return the favor ;)