|Reviews for Who Cries This Night?|
| Eirien chapter 1 . 6/17/2004
Good job. The repetitions work really well, and I like the way you explore all different kinds of pain and reasons for crying. The short, broken lines are very effective.
| arbysauce93 chapter 1 . 6/12/2004
Ooh, I like all of the different types of pain and reasons for crying that you described. I especially like how the last one was anger, because anger is pain as well. Great idea. Keep it up!