|Reviews for Wraith|
| arbysauce93 chapter 1 . 6/12/2004
You definately showed some powerful emotions here, and did a good job at using many descriptions to describe your 3 emotions. I love the lines, "I plead to be not alive", and "I am a wraith, All I feelis pain, slashed hope, And longing". great metaphors. Keep up the good work.