|Reviews for My Favorite Vision|
| Tory chapter 1 . 2/4/2005
I've had LOADS of dreams were I can feel people bump into me, touch me and even breath on me. I've also had dreams were it's so real but i don't feel anything, like it's all not happening or a simulation (this isn't what i'm supposed to be saying though) I think this one needs alittle work, like you said a tad bit more expression, and for some reason to me the words don't seem to flow evenly. But good good! keep working!
| Bambi chapter 1 . 1/15/2005
it doesn't lack emotion, it has plenty of emotion in it, and I have a lot of dreams where I feel what's happening, esp recently, well recently meaning earlier this year...anyway it's a very good poem, and i agree w/ the other person, good rhythm. See u don't need to be able to rhyme to have a good poem! ;)
| Nienyalie chapter 1 . 6/11/2004
I know of what you speak of, I like the poem though, the rhythym is smooth, very nice.
| lalamushu chapter 1 . 6/11/2004
actually, i don't think it lacks emotion at all. i think it's filled with a lot of emotion. good job!