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Very nice! It's almost song-like. Got a tune for it?
I don't usually approve of that much profanity, but you use it well. Good job!

dark, wow! i liked it. just the title seems a tad long, but then again i dont have a better suggestion so imma be quiet, hehe!

wow! this is awesome! some parts don't seem like they flow quite right but... this is a song and since i don't know the tune it could just be the way i'm reading it. lol! anyways, this is a great piece. it really speaks for itself and is just very... real. keep up the great work!
thanks for the review! it's always inspiring to get great reviews like the one you gave me!
E. Hisifithith

i like this, it makes a nice song. thanks for reviewing! um can you do me a favor and review my poem (it's called poeme -_-) i like it the best of what i've written but people haven't reviewed it TT_TT off to review more...
oh, one thing: poems don't always have to rhyme to be considered a poem. -_- sometimes it sounds a little forced if people do that too much.

Powerful, beautifully raw.

Powerful. That is the only thing I can use to describe this poem. Damn, the imagery is awesome, and it comes alive inside my own mind to the point where I feel exactly as you did when writing it. Awesome job.

Wow, this was amazing, you should really record this and then let me listen to it because it's really good. I didn't know it was a song when I clicked on it and then I started reading and thought to myself, "This sounds like a song." Lo and behold, it was.
Thanks for reviewing my poem!
~A. Person

Very true to what the feeling expressed is. I like how you aren't afraid to make your poems dark. They're very good.

*is momentarily speechless* That is completely awesome! It's so raw, so..so...it's awesome, truly, keep it up.