|Reviews for O GodHave You?|
| reflected translation chapter 1 . 6/13/2004
i don't know if you believe in Jesus Christ or the bible, but i do and when i read this poem it made me think of a verse from 1 peter 5:7 'Cast all your anxiety on him because he cares for you.' its just a simple verse, but if you're feeling like God no longer cares, it gives you a sense of comfort.
| lalamushu chapter 1 . 6/12/2004
i'm sure a lot of people have felt this way, so don't worry about it too much. you seem to skip back and forth between grammatical corrections and then you go to the typos. sometimes you capitalize the "I"'s, and sometimes you don't. sometimes the first letter of the first word of the sentence is capitalized, sometimes it isn't. i think when you write your poetry, it would help to double check the little things before posting. i love your sense of feel that you put into your poetry though. really superb.