Reviews for A Kiss in the Rain |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, that's so sad. I'm on the verge of tears... Absolutely wonderful, but sad. I hope they find each other again anyway! |
![]() ![]() oh God that's just...but they weren't meant to be- not really, maybe in the future when they meet again or something...but that doesn't look very probable and doesn't make it any easier for now...she's going to be wallowing forever- she's going to love him and miss him forever isn't she? he'll pretend but never forget either- right? that's mean! good job on conveying the emotions well. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() hm you should make a story out of this...very good |
![]() ![]() UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE FOR THE LOVE OF GOD UPDATE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow! that was a beautiful piece. i think the best part was that the characters didn't get together in the end, it just made the writing sweeter and more intense. keep up the great work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() *is quite teary-eyed at the moment* That was heart-wrenching to an extreme extent. But very well written, almost like tragic poetry.-SAT |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw... *cries bitterly* that was so sad :o( but so good! |
![]() ![]() ![]() screw sniffing...i was close to outright bawling. but it was a great story anyway. listen to all the nice people! make them happy and such whatnots! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() *sniff* Well, you weren't the only one who cried at the end. This story is so sad... And great. I loved it. I feel so sorry for Leigh and Luke... |
![]() ![]() Well, for all your offshots from your _incredible_ "tears of blood" i like this one the best. I don't know what you were doing with the poem... interesting subject matter, but the rhyming scheme was just painful. You kinda did it, but not well at all. The words would rhyme in the singular, but you'd have one singular and one plural. Just...no. Say no to rhyming. Ohkay..back to story. Really like it. Would really like to see a sequel. Good charactization...so I didn't cry, but I was very, very sad. Darn it, distract me with something happy! (The Hollywood Fairytale is next on my reading list...sorry.) |
![]() ![]() ![]() YES! plz continue writing, that was beautiful and sad and...UGH! You just have to continue with this, and i love to see how things turned out for them in the future. PLEASE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() brilliant :) nice. a happy ending isnt always the best, so even though i enjoyed this, it would be nice if you left this as a one shot thing. ~keep writing... |
![]() ![]() ![]() W.o.w.! Please make some kind of sequel! This was great! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, very powerful. Sequel, deffinently. You have such good stories! Thanks for writing so well, I enjoy them. |