Reviews for Bonded
Ben Wuest chapter 1 . 5/31/2006
... where are you these days? It's been so long now, it's a wonder I haven't forgotten. You've probably forgotten. I miss the times when you would flame the flamers of my stories, so that I wouldn't lose faith in my writing abilities. Those were good times. I've had so many ups and downs since then, so much we could have talked about! But you're gone...

dino chapter 9 . 9/11/2004
Well, a good story so far. I want to see how this turns out, so start writing some more chapters! :)
Wolf Queen Lover chapter 9 . 8/9/2004
Well done!
This left me chuckling and wanting more. Please, do keep adding to it, this is such a wonderful start.
Surfergirl chapter 1 . 8/2/2004
Neveah, this is wonderful! I am totally on your guys side now after seeing all of that racism in Lundi's bio! Well I'm gonna go surf some more and go play with my transformers toys! Great job!
JonPon chapter 1 . 7/29/2004
Dont listen to those idiots, i think your writings are awesome. Keep up the awesomeness!
MrFlames chapter 1 . 7/28/2004
Your first chapter blows. Much like my next essay! Jesus hates us all, yay!1!1
Avsman 5000 chapter 2 . 7/27/2004
Hey! Congrats! *High Five* We couldn't have done it without you! You'll be receiving your war medals in the mail any day now! Another great chapter too! You're really keeping me hooked!
Haters VS Nuns chapter 1 . 7/27/2004
To Whom It May Concern:
Visit my Biography if you are participating or following this War on Fiction Press... *Just click on Haters VS Nuns that is underlined to the left*
Avsman 5000 chapter 1 . 7/24/2004
This has started out really well. Cool names, rich, deep, characters and plot. Very good. Oh yeah we changed the name of our Posse to "The Flying Nuns!"
Lady Kaede chapter 8 . 7/23/2004
Wow cool sotry adn very original. Please write more I cna'twait to see what happens and please I beg of you tell me Keaira has a romance with Hawks oh please! lol
An Inside Joke chapter 8 . 7/23/2004
I like Iluska's charecter. I hope she shows up more often later in the story.
An Inside Joke chapter 7 . 7/23/2004
Be careful not to make Keaira too perfect.
An Inside Joke chapter 5 . 7/23/2004
Needs a little proofreading. Have you by chance lead the Farseer trilogy by Robin Hobb? The story itself is very different, but the idea of bonded animals also comes up in the story, and while most everything else is different, I've never seen an idea quite like it anywhere else.
SysheKieriLiandrin chapter 1 . 7/22/2004
Not bad. There were a few typos that you might want to fix, btu aside from that my only suggestion is to have a bit more of an introduction... show the characters and their relationships a bit before jumping right into the main action.
An Inside Joke chapter 1 . 7/21/2004
The beginning seemed a tad bit rushed, but after the wraiths appeared, things were better. I'm curious about the details of the bonding between Iluska and Bianca.
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