very cool, em! i love it! you're so much better at story writing then me! lol keep up the good work!

Emily... wow. what more is there to say really. very good write. very dark and very charming. i hope to read more soon. keep up the good work.
~~ Whiteeyedwolf~~

Alas, the fate of poor Alyxe! Mightn't she ever find her place in the cruel world? Lol very good update. I hope it's soon followed by... yet another update! Yay!

I was directed to read this by your friend (She reviews my stories under the name of Adhara1). And I am so glad she did, this was brilliant and strangely moving in a dark way. She said you wanted pointers but honestly I can't see how you could improve this enchanting piece. The Imagery is spectacular, captivating if you like, and it is difficult to find anything wrong. If that doesn't satisfy you though I could read again and try harder but to be quite frank, you have talent!

EMILY! YOUR FIRST STORY! I'M SO PROUD OF YOU! *SNIFF* YOUR FIRST STORY! lol love ya dnq
~Elise~

Yay for Emily! Her first fiction piece on fictionpress! I'm so proud of you! I thought it was very, very good and I would like to request that you write a new chapter soon lol.