Reviews for Tears of Truth
g-e-kutie chapter 1 . 12/11/2004
I love it...there's a depth of emotion that you've capture. Lovely.
Dreaming Slumber chapter 1 . 12/8/2004
If this was a movie it would be the one where all the girls leave with lines of ruined mascara from their tears...

You're a good writer. You seem to capture emotion.
fizgiggle chapter 1 . 12/6/2004
Hey thanks for reviewing! It does seem a little unfinished but it's still beautiful. You pulled off the repetition very well - in many poems it can get annoying so well done!
Peachy Pyro Demon chapter 1 . 10/6/2004 gave me the goosebumps again!good job! the cool thing about some of your poems is that they are short and sweet, yet give you emotion to feel from the first line. that is really good. KEEP WRITING
LuminousIce chapter 1 . 9/16/2004
When a story has reached the best of its potential, the author typically thinks that he/she should add to it. But adding to something that is fine just the way it is doesn't always work, does it?
zt chapter 1 . 8/10/2004
Aww, I think it's great the way it is -
BTW nice rhyming
Jarien Scienna chapter 1 . 6/20/2004
Hey I like it... wow I havent revewed it yet cus i didnt know what to say now I do i Really care for you and I hope you happy being wit me, The poem itself is good enough I like it alot... It does seem unfinished but like the other person said dont try to rush it. it took me three weeks to write My poem to you and I still dont think that one is completely finished... I love you and i really mean it and I like this poem alot. (I wonder why lol)
Novi Astley chapter 1 . 6/14/2004
Honey, it is done... and hey, i've decided to start signing my reviews... go me! seriously though, go you! that kicks arse, and thumbs up to whoever you found :)
Nienyalie chapter 1 . 6/13/2004
It is beautiful, passionate and heartfelt. I kind of agree with you that it doesn't seem finished, but my advice to you would be to leave it alone, observe it but don't force yourself to make any changes until something comes to you. That's what helps me.
Mallory chapter 1 . 6/13/2004
smooth rhythm, nice flow
Visions of Harmony chapter 1 . 6/13/2004
confuddling but good, short and brilliant. i likes alot!
Melui chapter 1 . 6/13/2004
This is cute, I like it. Good job.
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 6/13/2004
wow thats nice! i like it
lyricalprose chapter 1 . 6/13/2004
beautiful. there is no other words to describe the feeling i get inside when i read your words. beautiful is the only thing i can think of at 4 am. wonderful job love