quite a dark doyle in this one! (about 'doyle,' see my review to "The Laborious Tasks on my Last Day" -)
the word flow is wonderful and the way your doyle speaks, describes (the way YOU describe, actually. being you the author and all-), makes your doyle all the more complex and the poem all the more insightful and enthralling.
the writing is really beautiful!

Hm i like this poem it's really good i like the part about the angels a lot