i liked your story, i also want to tell you i added something to my profile. i hope it clarifies any questions you hadabout my story see you next reveiw-chaos from the knight of doom.

That was very, very nice. It works nicely for a one shot - they're usually slightly awkward.

Wow. This is kind of creepy. Very nice style that you used to set up the entire mood of the piece. I don't quite understand what's inside of the gate though that has him so terrified.

Very good piece. Your description of the garden was nicely done without going overboard. And the dialogue was perfectly believable. Great job, keep writing.
**Slave**