i like it write more! sonn and make matt save her that would b realy sweet...

!feather's!

i like this story so far but you use a very common theme in these type of stories that i can't stand. you said you accept criticism so here goes. I don't like this: "But the man, she hated to admit, was drop dead gorgeous." That's annoyingly shallow. When i see someone whos hot or gorgeous or what have you, i don't let my opinions of the person, man or female, be affected by that, even if i am attracted to the person. Why should anya hate to admit that matt was gorgous? so what if he is. I've disliked plently of people who i've found perfectly beautiful.I could understand her being a bit ashamed for her boyfriend/fiances sake if she was attracted to him, somewhat, but not for assessing how someones looks. we all do that. And even then i don't think its nessicarily bad if your attracted to more than one person at once. Were human, and as such we are compatiple with multpiple matt did attack her boyfriend so i understand her heisitancy to like him in her particular situation. Also i don't understand why she should hate to admit that she liked matt's pancakes. just because he kidnapped her doesn't mean she should have to find fault with all his abilities/characteristics. Anyways i just think its shallow of anya to think that way. Unless she starts feeling affection for matt i see no reason for her to be upset by such things. Well I hope you understand what i meant to say. I know it was sort of jumbled. Anyways, i shall continue to read on. I find this story interesting so far and i hope it gets even better.

Continue! Continue! Continue! It's wonderful! I cant wait for the next update!

comeon you evil person you really like cliffys don't you so anyway please write more

C.P.

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UPDATION! i just read all of these chapters and then realized you havnt updated for like a year ... please update...its really really really really really really really good

update this please ! one year already

Okay, first of all I would like to compliment you on the idea behind the story although there are some major idiosyncrasies within it. Your characters -Anya and Matt- are yours to create and build on, but my interpretation of their personalities from what you've written suggest that sometimes they are a bit OOC. In the first chapter for example, Anya seems the type that is not afraid to speak her mind even to her father, which makes it hard to believe that she would willingly accept the fact that she was kidnapped, and that she would actually comply with her kidnapper right away. I understand that she may feel defeated and therefore accept the food but her personality argues that she wouldn't give up so easily and not so fast either. Instead, she could've refused to eat at all which would force her kidnapper into a feeling much like concern, because afterall, he is her ward for now and must keep her alive. She might've also done something as extreme as trying to throw a plate at him or something :) That would force them into a tense environment which would be normal considering the situation!

'She suddenly felt happy she was kidnapped. She had always wanted a little adventure, and this one was surprisingly enjoyable.'

Instead of simply writing this, you could build some more emotion into her feelings and perhaps justify her contradicting thoughts. For example, you could say, 'Her desire for freedom came with a price...one she wasn't willing to pay. But the exhiliration from her situation came unbidden after years of living within the confines of the White House. It sickened her heart to get this perverse pleasure in escape whether it was willing on her part or not, but a part of her resigned to this with an eagerness she chose to forget.'

Also, I kind of find it hard to believe that her kidnapper would be so friendly as to give out his name. If anything he should have an alias. But the little bits if information consisting of his life and Anya's should be revealed a little at a time since neither of the two can trust each other so easily or shouldn't be able to anyway. The only reason for the leak of personal information from one or the other would arise if the situation allowed it - meaning Matt used his power to force it from her.

I do however, like the fact that Matt is suspiciously nice to her, giving him a charming quality, but being a kidnapper he also needs an mysterious aura around him.

I hope you read this amazingly long review and consider it with an open mind. This is meant to be constructive criticism and I trust you not to think of it as a flame because that was not my intention. Continue your story, I'll be reading :)

Hey! Like the plot...nice story...update soon!

~Lithamis

Hello! I'm glad I found this story and read it, even though I didn't do my homework because of it... whoops.. Oh well, I love Matt's character! I wish I can find a guy like that! And what's gonna happen to Anya? Ah...

I like this story. Please tell me you'll come back and update it soon. *whimpers*

Don't stop there! Please I really hope you update, and soon! PLEASE!

*Sara Kay

Wow, I'd stopped this chapter halfway through when the sunshine and daisies lovers' dialouge started to get on my nevers, but it's really good and I can't wait to read more soon!

When are you going to update again? I absolutely love your story and am waiting excitedly for the next chapter!

Now you really really have to update soon. I've just found the story and I love it.
I love the plot and, if it is a tad cliched, well you pull it off brilliantly. I shall be waiting with baited breath for the next chapter.
FalconWing.